Comments on: CONTEST: Mobile Bartender LOGO Design

By: Vanessa Samepedro

Vanessa Samepedro — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 21:27:12 +0000

As a Graphic Designer, I dont think this logo works.

I think your logo should represent what your all about….

hence ‘the traveling” bartender. The design ispretty to look at, but so are 10,000 other designs. you have to design it so that it makes your company unique. Best thing to do in this situation is get a piece of paper out, and start writing everything about your unique business, whats the high light of it? maybe a traveling bar? use your font and logo to represent that. you don’t even need pictures or a martini glass to make your logo stand out.

I think the best logos are logos that are worked from the actual fonts that people look at it and say WOW.

for instance – look at the FEDEX logo. You see the negative space between the E and the X … there is a perfect arrow… it means GO… fedex is always on the go. once you notice that you will never look at their logo the same.

Think about it! =)

By: Huzz

Huzz — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 02:38:22 +0000

need some nice ideas………

By: Denise

Denise — Mon, 06 Oct 2008 21:26:11 +0000

Hello

The name is cute and catching. The matini glass could be a little more elegant.

By: Craig

Craig — Sat, 04 Oct 2008 13:47:05 +0000

I like the name of the business. However, I believe the FONT conveys something different than what the owner wants. The font signifies stuffy, elegant restaurant on 5th Ave in NY City or the the Peabody Hotel. A private party business will need to cater very few highly sophisticated in house events. Therefore, I would recommend that the font convey more a sense of “FUN” as opposed to the above mentioned image. Having said this, I know businesses have MANY logos so this may be one that you would use to a specific clientle. Great name and good luck with your new business.

By: Kyle

Kyle — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 20:19:05 +0000

‘Mixed Messages’ is by far the best way to put it. The format of the text gives a perception of elegance, yet, the name is somewhat less flattering to that effect. Not to say that The Traveling Bartender isn’t a decently conceived name, but it kind of gives the visual of a door-to-door salesman, which is anything but elegant. And I have to agree, as boring as this is probably getting, that the martini glass really doesn’t belong at all. Maybe a whole new design for the glass or a new design for the font and color scheme. By themselves, you have great elements, and a great idea. But as a group…

By: Nick

Nick — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 11:54:13 +0000

I agree. The logo looks great and the name is a perfect fit, but the martini glass is a little off. A few slight tweaks to the glass would be great. It makes for a great business card. One idea may be to get a large martini glass from an art supply store and put the business cards in there on your bar!

By: david

david — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 10:14:54 +0000

James

Just received your Bartender4Profit program. LUV IT! Great stuff! I’m going to build my bar this weekend and start up my website – can’t wait to use your tips (which will increase MY tips)

Thanks!

David

By: Mitch Orahood

Mitch Orahood — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 06:29:40 +0000

I like the design, understated yet classy. If the cocktail glass was embossed so that it shimmers and catches the eye that would look cool. I like the paint stroke.

By: Dana

Dana — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 02:11:46 +0000

I like the color scheme, I never would’ve thought to put the two together. The logo as a whole sends mixed messages. The font with ‘travelling’ is fancy, combined with purple – suggesting classy. The maroon/Tuscan font . . . not sure what to make of it. I would try another. And then the glass – - somewhat cartoonish, doesn’t seem to go with the rest of the logo. I guess it depends on how you want to be perceived.

By: wade

wade — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 00:02:51 +0000

I like it! It’s simple,yet smooth.It tells you what the business is without having to guess.The purple martini needs to go.Everyone uses a martini glass .Go with something like a shaker tin on wheels?